Hayeon Park
Prof. Kyle Brebner
IERW(03)
25 September 2015
Rain, Steam and Speed –
The Great Western Railway
The
first time I saw ‘Rain, Steam and Speed– The Great Western Railway’ was during one
rainy afternoon in Han-ga-ram Art Museum. The sky in Seoul on that day was
still dark even until noon. The surrounding environment made me feel as if I
was in a tense fairy tale, with exceptions to the thunder and lighting. It felt
like the dark afternoon gave me an assignment to resolve something while I rode
my way by the train. Many people on social networking sites said that Seoul
resembled the city of Gotham and it was scary. But I was pretty sure that the
weather helped me concentrate on the painting even more. ‘Rain, Steam and Speed – The Great Western
Railway’ had some differences between superficial appearance and the hidden meanings.
Superficial appearance of the painting looked calm and silent but there were hidden
meanings giving warning.
‘Rain, Steam and Speed – The Great Western Railway’
by William Turner looked calm and silent superficially. It was drawn as if
the painting mimicked the sky on that day. There were train that seemed to stop, gloomy
fog and cloudy river in the painting. That is why the drawing was familiar to
me. Especially, the train with large wheels was heading towards visitors that
were looking at it from a straight point of view. So I was wondering whether it was stopped or onrushing towards us.
Contrary to outward appearance of the painting, ‘Rain,
Steam and Speed – The Great Western Railway’ had some hidden meanings giving
warning. First, you can see some
white bundles within the painting. If there had not been a digital copy of the
painting I would have never known what the true identity of the ‘white bundles’
were. Ironically, there was one white rabbit as the digital art indicated. At the
period of time William Turner drew this picture, an Industrial Revolution had
happened and machines set the trend absolutely. It
all changed like Turner’s name indicated. People who used to plow went out to
learn the ways to push buttons at a factory. So there was one interpretation
that the rabbit symbolized nature that was being pushed backwards by the
industrialization. It is most likely that William Turner intended to show the
greatness of industrialization. Second, in the picture, the form of the train
surrounded by the fog wasn’t clear. This indicated that he wanted to represent
the tremendous speed of the train which could not have been compared to a horse
and carriage. But William Turner didn’t paint only to show that kind of the
greatness. William Turner showed us that civilization was driving out of breath.
He might have wanted to let us know that machines will overtake human beings
someday. Lastly, a third thing, there were two horses plowing the field on the
right side of the bridge while a boat fisherman and girls dancing were drawn on
the left hand side. They were drawn very dimly. This implied that they too
would disappear soon among the crowd celebrating the Industrial Revolution.
After I knew the details about the
picture, the Korean film ‘Snowpiercer’
by director Bong Jun-ho suddenly came to my head. The train in the movie, Snowpiercer, ran indifferently no matter
how vicious and awful of an occurrence happened. But from the outside the train resembled
a placid incubator. I thought carefully if there was a difference between the
trains from the 19th century and the ‘Snowpiercer’. My answer was that the sweet jelly of red beans, ordinary
foods, degrade to protein blocks which were made of cockroaches while delicious
foods became more luxurious. In other words, both of them showed that the gap
between the rich and the poor is getting bigger. Plus, all they presented was
only order that existed except human beings. Now, one line that did not
appealed to me while watching the movie went through my mind. “We need balance
about everything”. William Tuner might also want the balance between humans and machinery.
You made some good improvements by clarifying some points and making some corrections. You still need to include a stronger thesis statement that more clearly previews the key points you will discuss in each body paragraph. Also include topic sentences in each body paragraph that use key words from the thesis, and review all the key points in the conclusion.
ReplyDeleteThanks! I fixed it again as you indicated me. How about it now? :)
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